ShadowEmmi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Treton Part 3 Battle Rage]

Nothing to new or intereseting..

Now, the music is a little to loud and the graphic isn't standing out. It's a little bit ugly to look at, if you had pot some effort into it, it could lokk REALLY cool because it's a good plot you got going on. But the music has to be taken down a few lvl's..

Denfng responds:

Sorry for being rude but just see how many light effects and detail backgrounds I have. Just see the chair in the beginning of the animation. Only in it there are more shadows, lines and other details than in your entire animation called "Flora". Just look the walls in the animation and every piece of little detail. For example if u zoom or something u will see thousands of lines, gradients and other details :/ ... I did all my backgrounds on my own for example I didnt use downloaded brushes like u did for the grass and the filter for clouds or something else. Maybe u think that the animation is ugly because the actions are happening in dark place which is not too shiny and colorful. Thanks anyway for the time that u spent typing the advice. And for the music because u said that it is too loud, I agree with u about that. My headphones are a little bit strange and output sound quiet. I guess on other headphones the music is really loud. Sorry If i was too rude but compared to a lot of animations in newgrounds mine is super detailed. Just pissed off! xD

[Sir Henry Studios Intro]

Almost perfect!

Nothing much to say about except it's funny! It's well done, it's a nice intro or opening, and it tells us that's it's yours! I would just like to have the toung out or something.. a little bit stupid when the "coco" sound comes. If you understand. Perhaps some birds flying over his head or something? Other than that, extremly well done!

sirhenrystudios responds:

Thanks for the feedback dude, greatly appreciated. Glad you liked it

[WIP - Design IV]

An allright start

For the music, it's just to import it into flash. Nothing tricky about that, just go to File -> Import -> Import to library (or stage) and then drag the mp3 file into the flash (I suggets you have created one layer for music)

Now for the main animation, it wasn't very high tech or anything, but I know what it feels like to try out a program and kinda dont know anything about it. For a guy that just got into flash, I'm not disappointed, I'm a little impressed. Watch my flash animation, it's my second flash animation (in my whole life) and I haven't started animation in school yet (but, the school that I'm attending to isn't a school for animation, more media, web-design, photo)

And! If you REALLY want to be good in flash, I suggest you take a look at Chluaid. He got som pretty sick animation (everything is done in flash, he changed program now, but his older work is done only in flash). And type "Flash Animation" on Youtube. See what others have done and try and find something that's suited for you. I'm currently learning only by tutorials and trying things out.

Hope this was to some help, not much to be said about the animation, maybe have a plot in the next one? and perhaps some music now that I told you how to do it.

LadyPhantom responds:

The problem with the music is that I don't have Flash at home, so if I need an MP3 file I kind of have to sneak it in xD

In the main animation, I I mostly wanted to play with Keyframes and layers and get a feel for the sequencing- far too much time spent in crappy programs like HyperStudio can kind of mess with how you animate :D

I'll definitely take a look, I love discovering new artists! Currently, I've been looking into some of the more famous NG Members like Kirbopher and Legendary Frog for inspiration, but the more the merrier!

Thank you for your review!

[Never Hear This The Same]

Funny, god idea, but lack of graphic

Haha! Extremly funny! Good lip sync too, but I miss a little better artwoork. You should have tried and make it more real. It looks kinda poor, but hey, it's only a little time consuming to improve the graphic so. Looking forward to see what's comming next

[Information Saves Lives]

Technology

First thing you have to do is make the play button work. had to right click and choose play. Other than that, probably would just opgrade the graphics. It was a nice short flash, But... didn't give me a special feeling that technologi is THAT important

[Funny dead]

Good?! WTF?!

You think this is good? I hate to say it but this is bad... Learn to draw better because the flash was poor! And you should never make fun of people that are dead or anything like that. This is horrible and you should go home and just give up...

[Legend of Sanji Part 1]

Yeah...

It was nice, but a little bit boring and sometimes hard to hear what the were saying. And try to pick up Sanji's personality better! I'm a huge One piece fan, and that Sanji didn't remind me much of Sanji..

abdur17 responds:

I'm a big fan of One Piece also. I am trying to do things that were never in the anime.

[Rain Loop]

nice one!

Not bad done! but I was just wondering, the rain only hits his head and not the cloths.. try to add that too. And when the rain has hit his head a lot of time, try making it rain from his hair.. if you understand what I'm saying. But a very nice rain flash ^^

Chronoraven responds:

You're dead on. Your ideas are wonderful and I plan to add more detail as soon as possible. Thank you for your constructive criticism!

[Naruto fan flash]

Please do it over...

It was nothing special about it, it was bad drawing, when the song hit the high notes it were like naruto still was just speaking...

[Black Holes]

Nice

It was extremely good, but make the text a little bit slower ^^

DarkPhive responds:

I'm generally a slow reader, so I timed it out to how fast I could read it, and then sped it up...I guess I read faster than I think xD