ShadowEmmi's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flying Revenge]

Wasn't that bad, but the sound is a little late I think. It might be my computer or internet, but check it out. Other then that, keep improving

yeswekenny responds:

must be because it's only one audiofile. used it as an event. but it works on my computer. nothing is off.

[NinjaFordz Demo 2012]

You got some serious potential in this if you could just make it longer and add a short story or make it more of a fight than one guy just powning the other.

FordzAnims responds:

I'm working on a new one so maybe it will be a full-length now with a Linkin Park song on it.

[Sir Henry Studios Intro]

Almost perfect!

Nothing much to say about except it's funny! It's well done, it's a nice intro or opening, and it tells us that's it's yours! I would just like to have the toung out or something.. a little bit stupid when the "coco" sound comes. If you understand. Perhaps some birds flying over his head or something? Other than that, extremly well done!

sirhenrystudios responds:

Thanks for the feedback dude, greatly appreciated. Glad you liked it

[WIP - Design IV]

An allright start

For the music, it's just to import it into flash. Nothing tricky about that, just go to File -> Import -> Import to library (or stage) and then drag the mp3 file into the flash (I suggets you have created one layer for music)

Now for the main animation, it wasn't very high tech or anything, but I know what it feels like to try out a program and kinda dont know anything about it. For a guy that just got into flash, I'm not disappointed, I'm a little impressed. Watch my flash animation, it's my second flash animation (in my whole life) and I haven't started animation in school yet (but, the school that I'm attending to isn't a school for animation, more media, web-design, photo)

And! If you REALLY want to be good in flash, I suggest you take a look at Chluaid. He got som pretty sick animation (everything is done in flash, he changed program now, but his older work is done only in flash). And type "Flash Animation" on Youtube. See what others have done and try and find something that's suited for you. I'm currently learning only by tutorials and trying things out.

Hope this was to some help, not much to be said about the animation, maybe have a plot in the next one? and perhaps some music now that I told you how to do it.

LadyPhantom responds:

The problem with the music is that I don't have Flash at home, so if I need an MP3 file I kind of have to sneak it in xD

In the main animation, I I mostly wanted to play with Keyframes and layers and get a feel for the sequencing- far too much time spent in crappy programs like HyperStudio can kind of mess with how you animate :D

I'll definitely take a look, I love discovering new artists! Currently, I've been looking into some of the more famous NG Members like Kirbopher and Legendary Frog for inspiration, but the more the merrier!

Thank you for your review!

[Legend of Sanji Part 1]

Yeah...

It was nice, but a little bit boring and sometimes hard to hear what the were saying. And try to pick up Sanji's personality better! I'm a huge One piece fan, and that Sanji didn't remind me much of Sanji..

abdur17 responds:

I'm a big fan of One Piece also. I am trying to do things that were never in the anime.

[Rain Loop]

nice one!

Not bad done! but I was just wondering, the rain only hits his head and not the cloths.. try to add that too. And when the rain has hit his head a lot of time, try making it rain from his hair.. if you understand what I'm saying. But a very nice rain flash ^^

Chronoraven responds:

You're dead on. Your ideas are wonderful and I plan to add more detail as soon as possible. Thank you for your constructive criticism!

[Black Holes]

Nice

It was extremely good, but make the text a little bit slower ^^

DarkPhive responds:

I'm generally a slow reader, so I timed it out to how fast I could read it, and then sped it up...I guess I read faster than I think xD